Suddenly a black hole in the middle of the paper appeared on a desk out of know where. I did not know how I found it or how it got there, that made me curious and scared so I put my hand through it. It went right through it, that made me think I’ve discovered its power, and that made me feel really scared. I put a cup through it, and it went through it and ended up under the table.
I wasn’t so scared then.
I started using it for unlocking doors and practiced using it on tables because I wanted to have a bit of fun. It made me feel more encouraged and fully not scared anymore. I put the paper with the black hole on the floor and went through because I went crazy, but
I’ve just found out that there was no coming out. I was stuck in the basement and the door was locked. there was only one way out and that was through the window, but it wouldn’t open.
So I looked everywhere for anything to use for smashing the window open and I saw golf clubs
on the floor and used it on the window “smash smash smash”.
It opened. Then I climbed out and went free.
Neo, I really enjoyed reading this story of yours. It was very interesting and creative. I enjoyed how you wrote and how you described the things that were happening. It was very fascinating. And I felt like I could see what was happening for you in your story because you told it in way which was easy to follow, and understand. But you also made it sound very interesting. Very good! Cool story Neo.
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