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Monday, March 18, 2013

Surfing Dog

Jack, is a fifteen year old teenage boy. Who lives with his parents and younger sister, at their beachfront house, with their pets, which includes two cats, and their small dog named Wilson.

Because Jack and his family live close to the ocean, Jack learnt at a ridiculously young age how to surf, on his very own surfboard. He began surfing when he was a cute six year old youngster. And because he learnt so young, he became a highly skilled surfer, who loved and enjoyed being in the ocean, and playing in the surf.


When Jack turned eleven, his parents bought him a small puppy for his birthday. Jack was extremely happy, because he always wanted a cool pet dog, of his own. It was a smooth gray puppy that has brown eyes. He decided to name him Wilson. And from that day on, they would always play together effortlessly for hours.

Every time Jack wanted to go surfing, he would take Wilson for a relaxing time in the ocean, and the surf. And Jack would teach Wilson how to balance himself on the surfboard, as the waves smoothly rolled over them and the shore.
As Wilson grew, he became more and more confident and experienced in the water. And soon he was miraculously able to surf on his own board, by himself.
Some people thought it looked a bit astonishing, but now people just think its really awesome.

One day, Jack and Wilson and his family went down to the water.  Jack and Wilson went to  have a surf with life jackets. Carefully they jumped in the water with their surfboards. Jack creatively curved through the water like a professional and Wilson was surfing through smoothly
like it was so easy. But a big wave washed them onto shore, but they were not endured or hert.
They finished  having fish n chips and headed back home with an exhausted face.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Neo,

    Jack and Wilson sound like a cool pair, what an awesome idea training a dog to surf It'd be much faster than doggy paddling.

    You might want to go back and have a look at some of your words, check that you've used the right one :)

    Awesome story, keep it up Mr. Hutchings

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